Some of things that have noticed and/or changed from the original animatic:
- Two focus pulls of the phone might be waste of time so we removed the first one, that way we can use that time for more varied shots rather than repeats.
- Changed the first typing shot to a still isntead of a pan that we took just in case. We decided to do that because we wanted the action to build up, instead of jumping straight into it.
- We noticed that at the end we had two shots that were from a similar to one another in terms of angle and framing, this was a bit disconcerting to viewers so we got rid of the frame where he looks shocked and simply kept the shot of the hacker taking off the headphones. This made the sequence flow easier.
- I edited and matched the speech of the main hacker to the footage as it was not long enough, we'll have to extend the script in order to fill the time, at the moment there are some gaps in the rough cut where the main hacker is not speaking at all.