Update 27/01/12

After our first pitch we received some feedback and suggestions. Here are some of the issues that was highlighted and some ideas of how to solve them.

• Opening sequence and film plot is too complicated. We need to cut unnecessary parts or change change the opening sequence/plot of the film to something more straightforward.
• Adding a gun shot would be unrealistic to the situation and complicates the process. We could simply take out the gun shot and have the agent simply knocking out and/or tying up the hacker.
• Lacking use of film theories. Could rethink some aspects of our current characters, settings and plot to fit more of theories such as Todorov's theory of equilibrium and disequilibrium, Propp's theory of character roles and Levi-Strauss' theory of binary opposites.
• Will the audience understand the hacking details? We could limit the detail the audience sees, but seeing as we plan to have the hacker speaking out loud, similar to the scene in The Social Network, we'll have to research basic hacking terms and other details, but being careful not to make it too complicated.